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Etched Upon My Mind

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As I reflect on the horrific events,
a nation forever changed that day.
Their cowardly acts made no sense,
innocent victims were taken away.

Family members simple perished,
without ever having said goodbye.
Leaving behind all they cherished,
loved ones praying to know why.

For several weeks I still prayed,
our nation wouldn't stay divided.
American flags proudly displayed,
and overnight we stood united.

I'll always see the face that glows,
when common folk becomes heroes.
 

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  • Kari gold member
    October 4, 2008

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    That last line really made me stop and think. You know so many common folks really did become heroes.
    Thanks for your entry


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    September 22, 2008

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    Love the rhyme and rhthem of your write. It is well thought out and put together, thank you for honoring those who fell that fateful day.


  • eves shadow
    September 11, 2008

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    Amazing!
    Extremely well written.
    I absolutely loved it!
    Thanks for sharing.

    Good luck with the contest


  • catalyst.
    September 11, 2008
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    wow...This just flowed from beginning to end..great job I loved the ending.