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Piercing



A pinprick is but a tickle,
when the sword is the thrust.

by; Karl Weiss - Topaz

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It came to me immediately upon reading your contest description so I fly with it.

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    September 27, 2008

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    Yes, this says something - I am still reading into this one - thanks for your entry and good luck lol


  • unavailable
    September 13, 2008
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    nice and true