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Who I Am (Dustookie2)



the story of my life
plays out in words
across the pages
but who really
knows the me
inside this mind
while I’m learning
more each day
about who I am.

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This is my second border my border queen has designed for me. Thank you really appreciate it hun.

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  • Harlequin Dance
    January 21
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    Beautiful poem! It's short but sweet.

    And I absolutely love the background. =D


  • penman gold member
    January 20
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well expressed. Love the background. Thank you for sharing.

  • paul england
    October 6, 2008
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    nice

    i know you my sweet lady take care


  • Roaddog Wolf
    September 30, 2008

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    someone might

    "but who really
    knows the me
    inside this mind" do you share that part of you? i think someone must know?


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    September 12, 2008

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    You are so awesome, and keep getting even better. Keep on learning about this incredible, mysterious, witty, and beautiful 'Mook'


  • lostangel07
    September 12, 2008

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    I like this one...We do keep learning things about ourselves and about others everyday


  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 12, 2008

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    Your words are they not so appropriate for all we women who learn more each day who they are...As the page turns on each new day..new dimensions and awareness of how we are in life and how it affects us and the others about us is apparent...The border and page is another wonder by Jeannie D..

  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 12, 2008
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    Your words are they not so appropriate for all we women who learn more each day who they are...As the page turns on each new day..new dimensions and awareness of how we are in life and how it affects us and the others about us is apparent...The border and page is another wonder by Jeannie D..

  • June-bug
    September 11, 2008

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    Mook, I love this one. Your words captures my own thought...as like you I learn more about who I am each passing day. Don't know if the wisdom they say comes as we get older or just life in general..somethings I am finding out about myself I like and others still confuse me. As I search for that internal being of ME! Love it!!!!!!

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