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love you so

I'm sorry i ran away from you
but all of this was too much, going way to fast
i was afraid that on day our love would jus fall apart
i ran far away hoping that soon enough this feeling for you wouldnt last
i've been deniying that i still love you, but not matter what i say to my self its not convincing..............
to erase you from my memories of us laughing at each other at what stupid things we did
at you drying my tears telling me not to cry, that you would always be my knight
you were every wish i made apon a star,cause  you are everything to me
i still cry at night wishing i could  go back and tell you how i truely feel
and take back everything i did to make you cry
you are my star you brighten my day , you take all the fear and pain away
i love you so ......oh please come back to me


(i wrote this poem 3 years ago n i jus thought its a nice poem)

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  • BadazzGangsta
    November 24, 2008
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    wow...babe..i like this..its nicely done...hehe..i love youuuuuu


  • Lislaine
    September 15, 2008

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    WOW I can sooooooo relate to this poem!!!
    Its amazing how someone can 100% describe how I feel!! I LOVED IT SO MUCH