Feeling subdued in
a world gone topsy-turvy
forecasting shades of gray,
intermingle in acquisitions
of color,
mystic as my weary soul
Overwhelmed by times
racing machine,
in a jet set realm of query
I fade into murky reflections,
distant to my destiny
Wondering where does it all end,
in this vortex of delusion
Beguiled by acoustic synergy
echoing in the mainframe
of my sanity
Author notes
OPTION 20 Winter Chill, Loch Voil
By Tom Barron
A contest entry
- Tom Barron Scottish Landscape Painter, Artist & Musician Multiple Prompts Contest by Kazytc.
2400 points, ended September 16, 2008, 35 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Honored
crazyfoolartist I'm flattered by your words
of praise for my poem. The art work used for
this contest is amazing. So rich and breathtaking.
It summons truth and awakens inspiration from
the deepest parts of the soul. Again, thank you
for honoring me. Blessings
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this fits perfectly with this painting...so beautiful and inspiring. Lovely write!
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Brilliant pen!
What fabulous words of pure wisdom here and a message for manking brought alive from the painting and the subject painted, you have penned a brilliant poem here so rich and deep and full of soul too! Love it, well done!
Thanks Millions for entering our contest and for the honour of your entry and best of luck too!
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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Your words are as deep as Loch Voil, where there is no world, no machine, no society, only what nature offers. Many thanks !!
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