Woman is immortal,
Goddess.
In Her presence Man stands erect
plunges into Her embrace
searches desperately
frantically
for ambrosia
spurting death.
Called to Her presence
resurrected to die again
a willing sacrifice
envious death
so passes Man's life.
Author notes
(option 4)
Penis envy is like expecting god to be envious that we can die, and he can't.
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This is a remarkable poem! It is sensual and well-written! Thank you for your entry.

