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Full circle

Dandelions and whispered goodbyes
Laying in the grass watching butterflies
Remembering dreams we never had
Trying to forget all that was sad
Kissing your sorrows away
I never even begged you to stay
Bitter love is the taste of my tears
Reflecting every single one of my fears
Clinging to the past forever
Thinking of the times we were together
Broken up and twisted down
In my eyes you wore a crown
Why then did you break my heart
These thoughts tear me apart
I wonder if I ever loved you
and wonder if you loved me too.
I carve your name in my arm
I wish I had never fallen for your charm
This blood of mine is bittersweet
My eyes close my circle is complete

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I loved him. I think.

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  • Sound of Madness
    September 11, 2008
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    Some of the rhyming seems forced, but I really liked it.