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Shores of Time (#4)

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On the sands of this old shore

 

that was once walked before

 

we now feel a mighty yearning

 

and in life we are still learning

 

from the past, lost in the gale

 

of yesterday, yet on we sail

 

in the misty shadow of that time

 

as we too, leave our shore behind.

 

 

 

Author notes

OPTION 4, 'Autumn Shoreline' By Tom Barron © 2008

 I would love to own this gorgeous painting!!

My poem, 'Shores of Time' speaks on history repeating itself...

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  • Celticpoet silver member
    September 12, 2008

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    Exquisite!

    Just when I think I have read the best that AP has to offer...you go and produce a work like this...If this write were a precious stone it would be a rare gem indeed..for it would be flawless!...an exquisite write beautifully crafted by a creative mind!..Bravo!...Dan xxx


  • Kazytc silver member
    September 12, 2008

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    Fantastic!

    This is just lovely and what beautiful words and lovely deep, pensive and profound message of sheer wisdom, you have such talent! Lovely.
    The painting is indeed beautiful and imagine owning this painting and putting it on your walls along side your beautiful poem all framed and aside it as a compliment one to one! Now that would be something, the painting illustrating the words you illustrate the painting with! Both sides of a coin beinging the other side to life! Wow!
    This is a brilliant write, well done, love it!
    Poetic Hugs & Best of Luck in our contest and thanks for honouring us with your entry its brilliant! Bravo!
    Kaz.
    Kazytc xx


  • crazyfoolartist
    September 12, 2008

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    A huge idea cunningly disguised as something small, hmmm timeless, universal and true. I really like this poem !!


  • poppa
    September 12, 2008

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    wonderful write... this poem has a soft elegance to it... good luck in the contest