In the back seat of my daddy's car,
I saw a sign:
"Turn right for Summer road"
It caught my eye
after waking up again,
I saw the rain going that direction,
and the clouds spelled July
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Life-Unknown.
875 points, ended September 23, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what did you feel i expressed?
Comments
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I really like this short and sweet.
Powerful imagery for only a few words, have to say i admire that.
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I like this poem very, very much, for it is filled with tender and charming nature imagery.
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Sentimental gist
Thank YOU for answering my request for a heartfelt measure of insight on my metaphor.
So, I didn't just write about what could be soft, but brought what it deserves to life?
Daisy
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