The fact remains,
That I deserve nothing
Except to die
But who wants to deserve nothing, who wants to die
Even though I don't deserve it
I want it, want what I can't have
It is the way our world has worked
We know we don't deserve it
But our lust for things is unquenchable
If I work for humanly things
I deserve them and want them more
But once I have them I won't want them
I know
That I deserve nothing
But I want, I'm ravenous, I'm avid
The fact remains
That in the eye of our society
I deserve anything and everything I want
Author notes
I believe that I only deserve your points if you enjoyed my poem about wanting them
A contest entry
- Want My Points? by pattyann4500.
3250 points, ended September 15, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Written in the eyes of our society (hope you enjoyed it)
Comments
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In the eyes of our society, most don't care, but they believe they deserve all they want. I enjoyed your poem and the honesty in it. Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest. Patricia



