conditioned
to copulate
based on
bilateral gravitation
a fission born
from social inertia
on the other side
of the fence
Author notes
http://tommcmahon.typepad.com/photos/uncategorized/2008/05/19/jealousy.jpg
That's all.
Yink 
A contest entry
- Set phrasers to STUN (This is a Contest.) by blind ecye dog.
850 points, ended October 17, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Why don't you ask me a question?
Comments
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This was good. I liked the wording. 'fission born
from social inertia' especially strong.
You felt a need to use a photo, (I think the poem could stand alone and still convey meaning), to explain the words. It did help in the understanding, but is not in keeping with the rules. RED -
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I use pictures because they make me laugh.
Thanks for the feed back. My friend thinks highly of you and told me to enter. When she tells me to do things...I don't have much of a choice. 
Thanks again!
Yink
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Hahahaha! That picture seriously made me laugh after reading this. *snickers*
Short and sweet and wonderfully crafted. Very nice!
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WTG on bitch-slapping your muse for this well written piece of brevity.
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Thanks for the horrid comment slut!
lol
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