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Baby Come Back To Me

Afar is my love from me
Here I sit on the window
The day passes by me
Sleep knocks at my door
But eyes refuse to sleep

Rain drops from clouds
Mystical mist fills the air
I’ve sat for days here
Yet I see no sign of my dear

I know I’ve got few pounds on me
What do you expect of me?
All I do is eat a lot
What the heck, girl’s got to eat!
Depression does that to me
And all day long I sit
Waiting for his return

Thinking….
May be he’ll come back to me

Baby come back to me…
I’ve not seen the girl next door
Hhmmm! What does that mean!!!

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 14, 2008
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    is that a real cat cause it is kind of creep, lol, but it makes for a great poem, keep it flowing


  • StarEyes
    September 11, 2008

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    Minoo,

    OMG! Perfect! This is just what I needed tonight! Thank you for posting a fun one! Perfect timing my friend!

    This is so much fun!

    and love

    Nyetta

  • dillpickle62
    September 11, 2008
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    Hahahahaha....

    Oh...what a great fun poem!