Fantasy's
Are they mere dreams
of things that we wish to happen?
Are they driven by the fashion of
our inner most passions?
like being made love to to jazz.
Are they reasons for dreaming
or just being?
Are they the reasons why we stay
up at night til the morning light?
Are they the reasons why we sit
and stare at the lover which whom
we wish to be bare?
Like a strong handsome
man with strong hands
and a body so grand.
Are they the reasons
why the strongest woman
can become so frail?
Are they the reasons
why a connection between
a man and woman
can start an erection?
Are they the reasons
why a climax can be
your relief for more
than just a moment?
Like the soft lustful
but blissful screams
of a couple sharing
an orgasm.
Fantasy's they are
Fantasy's they will be
what ever the reason
they are
Fantasy's
Author notes
This poem just popped into my head when i woke up. It was inspired by a fantasy that had been fulfilled. I hope you like it feel free to leave any comments. I am deeply sorry i havn't posted anything in a long time.
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You misspelled fantacies. The way you have it, with an apostrohpe, shows possession, as if something belongs to the fantasies.
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a wonderful poem good luck in the contest
maralisa
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Thank you for this wonderful entry as well as for following the rule. You have amazing imagery in this piece. I enjoyed reading it.
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Are they reasons for dreaming
or just being?
Are they the reasons why we stay
up at night til the morning light?
made me think a lot.
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Humm..an intriguing journey of the thoughts you poured into the poetic scenario..well done..and thanks for sharing it...
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I have to agree with Limelight... but this captures the feeling you were trying to convey well!!! Nice Work.
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i like the overall premise of this poem and how you talk about how we as people like to go off and live in our own little dream worlds for a while. it woas worth the wait for you to post something new hun. aside from some spelling mistakes the poem as a whole is great. it really hooked me in and sort of made me do a double take, especially the last 4 lines of the second to last stanza. i was like, oh hell no, she didnt just say that. but you did, and it really added to the force of this poem. great write hun. i hope to see more from you in the near future.
Rob
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