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Dead Breeze

In the mist of this summer dream
I lay my heart to rest

In a hopeful look in my eyes
I stare into this mirror

I see the lines of imperfections
Fall beneath the glare of the shimmering light that cuddles my cold and shivering skin

I look deep into these so called beautiful brown eyes
Why can't you see what I see

Pain so deep it lives and feeds off my blood and bones
I live for a dream that so far seems to be so unreal

Walk besides you hand and hand
Yet i feel so alone

Its like the dream I dream so often
I'm walking down a dark lonely path
when only the chilling dead breeze that walks besides me

I open my mouth to tell you my soul
But all that comes out is yes sir... i'll do as I'm told

I'll contiue to hide behind the paper with inked unsaid words
As I look into your eyes and whisper with my lips I love you till the end of time

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  • BrooklynnTainted gold member
    September 13, 2008

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    Wow your emotions really show in this. I like this poem alot. I love the last line its a little sad but great write.


  • drake21
    September 11, 2008
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    Your pain runs deep to your soul. Your heart is broken a thousand times but your love is so great that you keep coming back for more, holding on to that glimmer of hope that things will be ok. I think I understand where you are coming from. Its very good. very nice visualization. There is alot of feeling behind your words.