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On a partly sunny day



On a partly sunny day
in the pine flatwoods;
I'm carrying, not wearing,
tinted sunglasses

That's because I so want to see
everything that grows here
as clearly as possible
in original color.

(There aren't many creatures visible
due to midday heat, but a friendly frog
hops to greet me in the parking lot.)

Beautyberries, purply pretty
as always, pink periwinkle,
palmetto understory,
all kinds of viny things

White peacocks; Coco Plums,
lots and lots!  I'm 95% sure the fruits
are safe for eating, but just in case,
I resist partaking of these.

Anyways, the swamp bay leaves smell
aromatically spicy; and big yellow butterflies,
from time to time, appear in the sky

Along the gravel trail,
jumbo dragonflies,
'pipecleaner' pines.

Distracted by coffee berries' red,
I nearly walk right into a web,
eye to eye with the spider.


I'm thankful for the wind of this day
blowing from offshore, as further I explore;
thin leaves and round green cones
of pond-cypresses, starrush whitetops

Five foot high reeds, water lilies;
only thing I didn't see's the
giant gopher tortoise of last winter
--- I s'pose he must be hiding


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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    September 27, 2008

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    This is wonderful, I feel I am walking that trail alongside you. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.


    whisper


  • Maldronah
    September 20, 2008

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    I liked this very much. It reminded me of one of
    the nature parks on Long Island. The strange feeling
    of this is how things ought to be.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 19, 2008

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    WHat a wonderful place you have taken your readers. Well done this was a most definate pleasure to read. Do you watch the cartoon avatar?
    I believe they have gofer tortois's

    Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila


  • FreeTara
    September 11, 2008

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    WOW!!!!
    I love this, the truthfullness of what really is the in th world that we chould be admiring 'in true colour' not with tainted eyes.
    Thanks so much. Nature really is beautiful isn't it!

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