The ♥heart♥ wrenching agony t.e.a.r.s at my throat
Trying to hold
d
o
w
n
disgusting vomit
Head *pounds* and mind *races*
Body [[aches]], coldness takes over
Stomach acid eats its way -->though<--
The same acid that drowns;; my soul
Bleeding refuses to cease, it regulates
UP
&&
DOWN ღღ
Cigarettes taste stale, burn swollen throat & further ☆blacken☆ lungs
I fear that I am b/r/o/k/e/n, that this ..::sickness::.. wont go away
Baby Im
f
a
l
l
i
n
g
{short of perfection}♡
Cause life isnt always rainbows & ʚiɞ butterflies ʚiɞ
beat. beat. beating. of my heart is much softer now
This brutal romance is a SICKNESS & Im sick of you lies that cause me further нαям
I fight to hold back<--- the tears that insist on welling up in my (beautiful) green eyes
Until I hear the words "I love you...
H ♥
R C A
I N
S I
T
"
Author notes
christina-is-crazy
- A Dirty Pretty Group group list • next in list
A contest entry
- Anything You Want :) Enter Please :) by fairytalelovestory.
550 points, ended September 29, 2008, 51 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Bronze trophy winner
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550 points, ended December 24, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
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way im feeling right now
Comments
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love how you did the name at the end. amazingg
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lol ty
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wow. i loved this!
i loved the opening and ending liines the most.
chyeeah, it was good!!
hehe..
banna
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thanks! glad u liked it
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wow this is excellent! *finalists list*
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thanks so much! omg im so happy lol
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Hey, this is wonderful!
I really like this, and Im doing a project on DP poetry..
I was wondering if I could use some of your pieces for it..
I will give you full credit with a name and date, and whatever else you would like.
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thanks! as long as i get full credit babe you can use it 4 whtever it means alot tht u liked it!
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Yup, Ill make sure of it :]]
I did like it, so very much xD
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Oh finally a DP write. its the first i've read in my contest, i was beginning to think that i wasnt going to get any and that was gonna make me sad.
Cause life isnt always rainbows & ʚiɞ butterflies ʚiɞ
beat. beat. beating. of my heart is much softer now
This brutal romance is a SICKNESS & Im sick of you lies that cause me further нαям
I fight to hold back<--- the tears that insist on welling up in my (beautiful) green eyes
Until I hear the words "I love you...
i love that and i love how you have your name spelt out in the heart shape, it took me a sec to get that lol. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest, keep writing, and thanks for sharing.
Peace and loooove
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lol haha thanks! glad u liked it
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Very dirty pretty indeed! Wonderful imagery and excellent emotion. =] Thank you for the entry and good luck!
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hehe thank you
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i love how you wrote your name.
life certainly isnt always rainbows and butterflies is seems to be more like snails and apples doesnt it? i mena it never seems to go the way you planned it to go, quite the opposite right? everything just seems to get in the way of what you thought would happen.
great job.
good luck
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thanks, yea thts true lol glad u liked it and thanks 4 the comment
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Awesome.
I loved the feeling this poem creats.
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thanks
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wow! thats all i can say.. its like a picture of words right in front of me..
this is good. i loved it! keep it up!! well done!!!
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thank you!
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how did you do the swirly looking heart?
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i have no idea lmao i just found it one day
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Name in Notes!
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ok its thre lol sorry
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Wow...
this is pretty deep...
but I really like it.
Good work!
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thanks hunni
glad u liked it
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i'm going through the same thing
i love how you word it
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awwww im sorry *hugs* thanks 4 ur comment
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Hey id know that heart shaped name anywhere!! just like my beautiful!!! It fits perfectly here!!! I love your [[Dirty]] p.r.e.t.t.y <3 Keep writin chicka. && Feel better kays?
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Oz
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lol yupp i stole it
hope u dc. thanks awww yea ill try
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this is a beautiful dirty pretty write i love it wifey almost as much as i love you, hope you get feeling better soon and good luck in the contest, keep your head up and keep writing,
~Amy
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this is a great piece of work and your method of writing it has got to be commenede i love, as always the emotion that flows through your poems
fave part
'Cause life isnt always rainbows & ʚiɞ butterflies ʚiɞ
beat. beat. beating. of my heart is much softer now
This brutal romance is a SICKNESS & Im sick of you lies that cause me further нαям'
more brilliant work, well done gawjus
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thank you!grrr u always make me blush
lol u shuld try and write a dirtypretty! it would be great... glad u liked it thanks again babe
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