suspended
by fine line
between here and there
You and I
Coming and going
dependent on breezy-memory movement
and not harsh haranguing of high winds
When wild, it takes one’s breath away
When calm, it rocks me
in your arms
and I can breathe and weave again
Author notes
Inspiration - "Always remember to slow down in life; live, breathe, and learn; take a look around you whenever you have time and never forget everything and every person that has the least place within your heart.”
~Anais Nin
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- Breathe........A Morning Quickie (48 hrs) by poet2angels.
550 points, ended September 14, 2008, 13 entries
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Lovely. I love the comparison of the fragility of life and how easily it bends in the breezes of whim to the delicate web of a spider.
The spiders have been abundant this year, and I have have a sort of morbid facsination with them and watching them spin their webs. -
Sigh~
This is a flutter flittering through a delicate web of beauty (I feel like Rich with this comment) lol but that is how pretty it is
beautiful as a sigh
Lynda
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A beautiful juxtapostion of the spider and the human be-ing . . . We are all caught in a web of some kind, the trick is to allow it to move naturally upon the breath of life . . . beautiful, as usual, Carol . . .
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Delicate words...strong silk.
It's funny I happened on this beautiful web of words. It is one in a string of messages I have pondered today on the subject of taking time to observe...listen, think.
As usual you convey it so well!
xo
wolf
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Sigh... taking a moment to just live and breathe and be appreciative for all the wonderful things in life. Your free verse blows me away mom!
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