remove the whole pile of dirt
and it leaves you with a hole in the ground
subtraction is reaction, removing
ever changing Earth into a whole
leaves you a mystery you may never know
Author notes
prompt:
If whole is taken out of whole, whole remains
what is that
A contest entry
- Answer me then pen 5 mysterious lines by Venugopal.
425 points, ended September 11, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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practical take, loved it!
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Actually I think you did a great job with your explanation. In fact yours sound more mysterious. Good luck to you too.
Cheryl -
This is nice, wish I thought of that too.
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