Blind Can See by Pisces rainbow at All poetry

Blind can see,

deaf can hear,

when all five senses;

disappear.

Voice that whispers

from within,

guides the soul;

to begin.

Eye that sees

divine soul,

looks past flesh;

to become whole.

Release the fear,

you will see,

visions clear;

matters free.

Temporal,

are human eyes,

close them;

to realize.

It is not touch,

nor sight, nor sound,

that frees the soul;

heaven bound.

Senses trap,

soul in dark,

holding back;

flickering spark.

To see the soul,

will set it free,

close your eyes;

you will see.

A contest entry

Quickie (know my world) as i have known yours by solitarytear. 300 points, ended September 16, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be Inspired by Your Senses... by harriet567. 450 points, ended October 6, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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PrabhuDayal Khattar
October 5, 2008

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amen..what a logic you crafted to bring the eternal view of this life..your faith is wonderful indeed..thanks for sharing it...
Nicada
September 12, 2008

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Wow! A beautiful and spiritual write, so full of wisdom and insights. Your rhyme is great, and this flows very well. I really like the message you share here. Nice! Blessings, Patty
Ace - LightWithinMe
September 12, 2008

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Hello.

That start, I have something written like that but it needs work on so I never put it up; well you beat me to it, haha. I like very much the sentiments and thoughts in this piece, and think it is one of your better ones that I have read in a while. One small gripe would be stanza 5 line 1, I am umming and ahhing about that line, doesn't quite flow like all the others. Anyway, a sharp concise piece, and I am sure you know my stance on 'within', hahaha. I wish you well in the contest.

My regards.
jackysunshine
September 12, 2008
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Wonderful
Beautifully written words of truth. Love it.
maa
September 12, 2008

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my dear rainbow sister,

I think you have just taught us a spiritual lesson of the deeper meaning of the miracles of Lord Jesus who "made the blind see" ... if it is not (only) understood in a literal manner, we realize that this speaks of enlightenment ... not as a concept, but as a living truth ...
if you were patient enough to work on each of the sometimes mysterious quotes and scenarios that the transcribers of His teachings have wrapped into riddles, you would do us such a great favour ...
I have never understood a single line of the bible so far ... sorry
but I have been praying for several years that, one day, an enlightened being comes my way, in order to reveal the beauty, truth and evidence of His words ...
and here you are ...

I guess I'm starting to become less blind ...
goalsv
September 11, 2008

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Very smooth and sesitive write. A lot of good things to ponder come out of this one. Seems to have a theme that goes with the idea that sometimes to see close our eyes etc. Just a wonderful poem all the way around.
Maureen
September 11, 2008

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Very nicely done! In quiet meditation with no distractions from the outside world, our hearts and souls see what our eyes cannot see..the truth (and the truth shall set us free).

Maureen
Swangrnv
September 11, 2008
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beautiful
and very insightful message my sister! I LOVE THIS PIECE! I see a shiny in your future.
Rovingone
September 11, 2008
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To see the soul,

will set it free,

close your eyes;

you will see.

Those are such truthful words. You did a fine justice to the whole concept of spiritual awakening. Giving up to the idea of realisation of our senses and letting our heart lead us to the light.
BuriedTreasures
September 11, 2008

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Beautiful well written composition with flawless flow of the unforced rhyming verse.
I admire the truthful message this piece contains.
Well Done!