It feel broken
It feel so hurt
?is my heart gonna shatter soon?
I'm so broken
I'm so fell apart
I'm so torn apart
.these tears are flowing.
I feel so wrong
but
I feel so right
.both in the same way.
It's not i'm used too
It's not the way I do
.i'm changing into somebody else.
The blister knees
better than
The broken heart
.I feel so incurable.
i love you
but why?
you love her
.i still believe in you.
and i'm still here
unconsciousness
waiting for you
...for your love...
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option 1 by mizerdrea
inexplicable feeling by mizerdrea
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dun't know what to do...felt so broken...
Comments
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okay guess I'm gonna have to get that ole dictionary out again to find out what is a mizerdrea. This is an interesting write tho. Thanks for sharing it with us. Thanks for entering in this contest.
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Awww... this is sweet... waiting for true love... Very nice! Good luck in the contest!
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thank youu...
XD
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Thank you for entering.
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Aw this is excellent hun! I can totally relate to this. Good luck in the comp!
~love lae xo
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thank you...^^
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I can SOO relate to this and waiting for love is hard but you need to recoginize when it will work and wont and when to move on..keep writting and stay strong babe..
xoxox
Tasha -
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it's hard to do..
but i keep my faith for him...^^
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