July her name
Those beautiful eyes
She was so perfect
So i decided we should meet
Over lunch together
On the oval alone
We talked for a while
Then we left each other.
Then i stopped to think about her
Why she left me
How she never knew
How far i was, alone
Sitting waiting by the phone
My worst nightmare
My every nightmare
Wish i could take it away
Vanish for me that day
Say i stake it out
Me vs emotion
Felt like the end
Then i heard her name
Me and May
We met over afternoon tea
I felt this way happily
Nothing could go wrong
Blue sky
Beautiful sunset
We hugged for awhile
Then we left each other.
Then i stopped to think...
A contest entry
- Options~~ =) by Ti Amo Te Quiero.
360 points, ended October 10, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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kem, i love you man. ur poems are briliant (or so i think).
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Liking how your background is going round in circles, as are you...
Then we left each other...
Sad that, isn't it. Person to person to person.
Should call it pinball! -
Blue sky
Beautiful sunset
We hugged for awhile
Then we left each other.
nicely written...
I think you could've used more imagery though. -
I like it, it flows well. It makes you think. Good job, Keep writing please.
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Bro this is sick, i like it. good feeling good words
nice
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But what Category is it in? thnx bro
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