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Moving On

When life takes you where you don’t want to go
And leaves your head in a mess and your tears start to flow
And you wonder how you can carry on
Because you feel people have treated you wrong

Don’t worry about others and how they blame
We each have accountability for our own aims
Your responsibility is to yourself your own way you pave
Each makes the light around them by the way they behave

Be strong and handle your situation aright
Move on and know that you are guided by light
The light that is within your own spirit and heart
Will help you move forward and make a new start

If you have dealt with all with consideration and care
You will understand more because you have been there
Know that as you learn from the mess that you are in
When handled aright you will not have this situation again

You are never given more than you can bare
Your creator has given you this situation to prepare
Your spirit and soul to understand mankind’s pain
Because when you don’t understand your spirit can’t gain

Earth is a school where we get experience of life
To help us understand all mankind’s strife
We have to experience according to natural law
And as we send to others it comes back to us for sure

So even when people are mean to you
Turn away knowing it is only what you do
That has an effect on your own life and limb
Think positive and your heart will start to sing

As you begin to understand with positive thoughts your desire
You will empathize but move away from life’s mire
And although situations may still be grim
You will go forward in strength able to handle anything

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  • trekkergirl
    October 24, 2008

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    This is definitely a very inspirational poem. I really do believe in the words you spoke here. Good write. And I like the background too. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem and thanks for joining in my contest.


  • jackysunshine
    September 12, 2008
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    Thank you my friend for your lovely comments.


  • humblpye gold member
    September 12, 2008

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    That's absolutely wonderful...!

    I wish I could memorise every single line and word...you have captured the entire spectrum here, of natural laws and common sense, we all fall short sometimes, somewhere along lifes' road, thanks for the reminder for things that we often lose sight of...an eye for an eye...the law of retribution...well now, that's gods' business methinks! may you be richly blessed for this message of truth John


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    September 11, 2008

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    BRILLIANT

    SO VERY TRUE EVERY WORD,
    TO REACT IS TO LOSE,
    IF WE JUST ACCEPT WITHOUT REACTION HAVE COMPASSION AND LOVE
    WE GROW WE BREAK THE CYCLE.
    EXCEPTIONAL MY FRIEND
    LOVE IT
    GOD BLESS...

    • jackysunshine
      September 12, 2008
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      Love and Light

      Thank you for reading my poetry my friend. Its nice to know that others share your views and can express these thoughts as well in different ways, hopefully together we can help someone along the way to understand life a little more.

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