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I'll keep pretending



I walk the busy sky
In a paler shade of white

A face among strangers
Whose voice shall never be heard…

And even when I dance
No one sees the inner steps I leave

Deeper than the next grown up girl

Whose feet don’t belong
Engraved upon a black moon

Author notes

6. Face the music with denial's dance.

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  • penman gold member
    September 14, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.