Wouldn't it be great to have a sister
Who is older, and a little wise,
With whom you could share your laughter,
Or to chase tears from your eyes.
To whom you could confide in,
Who would offer you advice.
Maybe help out with your homework
Although with maths, I might think twice!
I'd read all that you have written
And posted on the site for us to read.
Leave you nicely constructed comments,
You'd be astonished at my speed.
And when you're stuck for words,
We could talk it through
To find the the best for your writing
In all that you ever do.
It won't all be plain sailing
I'm sure that we will fight
But I'd love to have you as a sister
On the most famous poetry site.
- Symphony
Author notes
Written originally for Dapigster's Family Contest.
In a list
A contest entry
- AP Family by owlish.
900 points, ended September 12, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is so sweet!! I LOVE IT!!
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This is so lovely
Atrue gold piece and congradulations on the trophy it is wonderful and the write sings with praise
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I agree, a cute poem. You definitely desereve gold. It doesn't feel forced at all, and it feels so sincerely sweet
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Sorry it took me so long to reply! But I definitely will accept you into the family! Love the rhyme! Cute poem! Thank you for your entry! love it love it love it!
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Yay!
Hey,
Yay, awesome
That's thrilling news; now I have [three] little sisters on AP which is just fantastic xDDD
I'm off to read the rest of your stuff now [hugs]
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aww, very cute rhymes and an all round cute poem She'll be very lucky to have you as an older sister.
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