My love for you is insatiable,
as our forms flow into each other,
the butterfly softness of your touch,
decorates me in pastel hues of rose blush.
Cocooning me in golden strands of contentment
my heart gasps in desires beat.
On the cusp of bated breaths,
I once again await the corruption....of your kiss.
Author notes
40-70
Pic from PHOTBUCKET
A contest entry
- Sensual PIF Picture Prompt! by perfectsunset.
550 points, ended September 11, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ohh that is lovely. So tender and gentle and sweet. Good luck in the contest
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Thank you for your lovely comment
Valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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Very good
Very good poem.....do you take classes or smthin cuz ur VERY gud at dis......you actually made me a fan of erotiic poetry
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Thank you for your fab comment, valued and appreciated.
No classes at all, except for acrostics.
I just write what comes to mind that the given prompt makes me feel.
I have been writing for just over a year...never done it before.
~sugar~
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Who snapped that photograph of you and me, Baby?
A fine piece - to say the least. Sugar! Short and Sweet and filled with heart and soul - just like you and your sweet and sensual eyes of blue! GOOD LUCK in the contest with it - and Thanks SO MUCH for sharing this one with me. It is easy to see that the lucky bloke below me has had quite and influence on you, too! Me thinks - Mrs. Toad (AKA) Sugar, Miss Honey, Michelle, and Chelle is head over heels, indeed!
Love & Peace!
Earl.
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LOL!! You and your sneaky photography
Damn good pic though 
Thanks hon for your fab comment, always a pleasure....valued and appreciated...Oh, so true head over heels indeed
Love you ~sugar~ xxx
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Stunning Piece of Work
Stunning Writing here. Very very romantic. The passion and the sensuality within the words is very beautiful. Wonderful writing Sugar. A sure-fire gold if ever I saw one.
Darkest Love
Wayne Leon
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Hiya baby, Thanks for your fab comment.
Good to see ya here again...as always it is a pleasure to have you read and comment...Always valued and appreciated.
Darkest Love
~sugar~ xx
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This is stunning hon. Sug your writing gets better everytime I read you. This is so sensual and loving, just beautiful and fits the pic perectly.
All the best
Emma
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Thank you Emma for your compliment..practice and reading other poets and books that's all it is. I am just so enjoying writing. If you ever have writers block Earls the one to see..he'll get you out of it LOL!!!
Take care hon and thank you for you fab comment.
~sugar~
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Mmmm, hmmm.
Very good, sis. Another erotic, yet tasteful poem by you. Fine job.
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I might have to do a bit of raunch soon Got to let ya heart miss a beat every now and then...don't worry I will have medics on stand by. LOL!
Always appreciate you reading bro
your sis ~sugar~
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a good sensual, romantic write!
This is your forte. The line 'my heart gasps in desires beat' is poetry.
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Thank you hon, for your continued support
Always a pleasure to have you read
Valued and appreciated
Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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Oh was this ever so deeply beautiful & touching.
You have penned this with such passion,
love, & wonderful thoughts.
Gorgeous imagery & so very breath-taking.
Loved it!!
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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Thank you for you lovely comment
Always valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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Hun
What a beautiful creation.. your words melt in awe of this image.
I love each line, the stanzas, and the poem..
on the cusp.. awesome !
Love sure brings out the inner beauty in you.
I do not envy the judge in this contest at all
Best wishes and may love continue to flourish forever..
Love Julie
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Thank you hon
For your wonderful comment, it is truly appreciated.
I have read a few, it is going to be a hard one to judge, I don't envy that task at all.
Here's to LOVE! Whoohoo LOL!
Love ~sugar~
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