Touch me.
touch me I say!
It is I
your love
come back for you.
No, I am not some deep dark phantom.
Nor am I a figment of your imagination.
I am real.
Here
touch me I say.
Feel me.
Know that I am real.
That our love
is real.
Know that I made no empty promises
to you.
That I came back
not even death
could separate us.
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by trekkergirl
In a list
A contest entry
- Step right in by Legend.
2800 points, ended September 27, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Filled with passion. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela
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very nice
Upbeat and happy you left a smile on my face great job, Boog
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A touchy ghost
Sorry. It would be nice if death did not separate true loves but alas; It does happen. Maybe though, to be rejoined after both of the lovers cross over.
Good luck in the contest.
Jim
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tender emotions here...mac
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I found this rather scary; the wording and meter leant a sort of threatening note to the write. Don't know if it was intended, but it worked for me. Well done.
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glad that you liked it.
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Oooh! Sent a little shiver down my spine.
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good it was suppose to
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Wonderful
Very well expressed. So well done and touching. Best of luck in the contest.
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thanks. Glad that you liked it.
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Love can travel even beyond this world Your words relay such lasting love A great take on the promt as gaylene said Excellent good luck in the contest
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thanks glad that you liked it too. I love the name. There was this movie that I just loved watching that had the name Legend as a title. Good movie. You ever seen it?
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Nuce take on this prompt. It has a deep feel to me, almost like someone is talking from the grave.
All the best with this
gaylene
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they were talking from the grave. Very good. Glad I got that across to you.
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