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My Haven...

What lies ahead after the rain?

A query of a man lurked in pain;

With dreary eyes yet a heart of compassion

Gripping hope from a new horizon.

 

What loses have I gained?

All the qualms must have been waned;

With loosened faith I look up the sky

Awaiting for something that might come by.

 

With great devotion I kneeled and pray

Heeding for what God has to say;

Forgiveness... redemption... divine grace

I set myself to end on God's place

My haven...

His heaven...

I seek to find on rainbow's end.

 

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  • passim silver member
    September 15, 2008
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    I think that the end of your rainbow sounds like it's a beautiful place, Lovely poem