i've kissed your lips
and touched your skin
you have taken my breath
and left me to die
i have given my heart
that is not yet returned
...
now i can start
...
you were a dream
that's all it seemed
broken threw walls
you have gotten into my head
you have kissed my lips
and gave me tips on how to live my life
then came that day
i asked you to be my wife
that one moment wen tears grew in your eyes
you fell to your knee's
and cud not stop kissing me
i loved you like no other
like i cud not love another
my sun
my moon
my everything was you
seems things fad so fast
wen you can't slow down
up on cloud nine
seemed like inches from the ground
walking down the street
trying to find out how to tell me
trying to tell my you were pregnant
...
that night
we both died
from cloud nine
right to hell
so far from were i started
trying to git back
i bleed so long
i was falling apart
can't believe
that anything
cud have happened so fast
with an angel she took me so far
so high
but now
i have fallen
right into hell
were my dream becomes reality
Author notes
#3 "You lifted me up to drop me so far"
'sell my soul, buy some love'
this poem was inspired by the quote "You lifted me up to drop me so far"i hope i had the right idea behind it -bows- thnx for the time
A contest entry
- Ultimate Challenge; Options Plentiful Otherwise by Kia Tenshi.
1700 points, ended October 15, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me what cha think
Comments
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you need to work on the spelling but im not gonna get on you for that..i have terrible spelling myself... but other then that it was a powerful piece... had me crying accually because i could feel what you were saying...
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I do like the idea of the poem...but the number of grammatical and spelling errors discourages it a bit.
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this is great brother
dark like your nomal poetry but sorta hopeful as well
i love you
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