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The Play (part 2)

From forth the shrieking terror, outside the window of the morn
He rose from Curtain Fall
Finding Curtain's call...


"I am but a humble man
a simple man
with simple plans
it comes to hands

To night's a night
a terrors fight
frightful flight
a mind-ful's sight!"

"They come, my guests
with runic jests
of how their diamonds
match their dress!"

"I Pity them,
I pity all
but here's the plan
chandelier tall"

"Complete with gems
and Diamond stems
Lovely spikes
to sew the hems.

Of death around
their suits and gowns
Oh how those hounds
Will scream aloud!"

How it torments me...

"Selfish! How they're selfish!
How they never fed the poor
To even open up a door
for the hungry by the shore!"

"How they hated oh they hated
how they Conspired on their own
Feeding off each other!
Like Fungus under stones!"

"Well then! I Will Show them a Cocktail party
One That they have never dreamed of!

So much Glee! Ho! So much Glee!
Malicious cycles circle me!"



"Like Purist dreams, They're perishing
Perishing under the seams!
And After all has fell and come...

Comes My the perfect Venging scene above..."

"That the Actor and my Actress
They will play the biggest role
Playing with this Lover's soul
But they would never know..."

"That Death in peril comes in Crows
and blacker things the hearts would know
Melting sweetly by ledge of snow
How they will never know...
How they will never know!"

Author notes

I wrote what came to mind.
as for the rhymes and schemes, its not all intended to fit perfectly. Its like a play...But it still flows rather well, its all on how you read it. I tried my best to fix it up a bit so it flows a bit more.
For some reason i felt like it would be the 2nd part in a mini poetry series of mine...anywho
hope you enjoy

A contest entry

just hope you enjoy and find your own personal meanings, as usual, comments on how you liked it or critique are welcomed, just be honest lol

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  • Crowknows
    September 16, 2008
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    A very dark write indeed, a disturbing little vignette, to say the least, well spun the imagery was excellent, however the flow was a bit choppy, couldn't help but think a more consistent rhyme scheme could have moved it along better. Well done my friend, best of luck in the contest.