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Torrential Tangent

 



A cowboy chased a cowgirl,
passed a wedding held in vain.
Black and white and masked,
some royals partied without shame.

Aquatic creatures swam on legs
and christmas came months early.
Food with mouths chowed on sweets
and sportstars came unburly.

Prom night exploded from a house,
themed in summer, or was it spring?
A mistress chose her favourite colour
and told friends that costume to bring!

Medieval patrons played
while actors observed the scene.
Animals ran havoc while
egyptians praised their queen...





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  • nansie
    September 14, 2008
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    Imaginative

    I like this poem, because it actually has various themes, thank you!!


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    September 11, 2008

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    Ooh yay this is so well done! I love this alot! your flow didn't fall of it's tracks. and your rhyming scheme is so seamless You rock hun!
    all my love
    your vampy xxx