I tried being normal but it didn't feel right
always predictable, an average bulbs bright
if you're gonna grow, bloom
i tried being normal but not being rocks
i can't live my life in a white plastic box
if you're gonna commit, do
I tried being normal but life didn't fit
with so many more options to satisfy it
if you're gonna be alive, live!
A contest entry
- I want it raw by Travel Notes.
600 points, ended September 14, 2008, 13 entries
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Well this sure gave a interesting view! Espically for those whom are different and live oridinary lives but different form everyone else. Somewhat reminds me of my I failed poems, but different, Much brighter moral.
Nice write lass.
Sincerely,
Deathwolf Tasagka
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I like it. I can honestly relate to the feelings and emotions in the poem. Who knows whats normal and whats not though Great write. Xds-gX
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right
to psychotic peeps all normal ones are crazy 
thanxu
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Cool poem befitting a cool prompt
You tried, you commited you bloomed.
Much enjoyed this read.
all the best
Ken
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thanxu
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