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Evolution of the Mind

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The semi-transparent gelatinous eggs,
are cubed for their appeal
As they gather in tight formation
trying to conceal

The former member whose sprouted wings
much too small to fly
But then again his new appendages,
are not fully dry

Being the first they’ve seen of this,
has taken them by surprise
It’s usually fins that come about,
he’s opened all their eyes

An evolutionary leap for them,
the largest of their time
But of course you’ve noticed,
that this all is in your mind

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  • The Cube
    September 14, 2008

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    That was definately a strange take on the picture. I don't think I would have come up with an evolutionary feel for the picture. Great work!