The semi-transparent gelatinous eggs,
are cubed for their appeal
As they gather in tight formation
trying to conceal
The former member whose sprouted wings
much too small to fly
But then again his new appendages,
are not fully dry
Being the first they’ve seen of this,
has taken them by surprise
It’s usually fins that come about,
he’s opened all their eyes
An evolutionary leap for them,
the largest of their time
But of course you’ve noticed,
that this all is in your mind
Author notes
"For Serious?" from Deviantart.com
A contest entry
- Abstract poetry #28 -For Serious?- by The Cube.
500 points, ended September 18, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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That was definately a strange take on the picture. I don't think I would have come up with an evolutionary feel for the picture. Great work!




