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In The Twilight

The moon hanging above,
like a lightbulb on a tree.
Like a noose on a rope,
tightly it held me.

I went into convultions,
presperation dripped
soaking my forehead,
I rose off the ground.

My lips flawless as diamonds,
no heartbeat in my chest.
Skin cold and hard as marble,
what have I become?

Pupils are consumed from green,
to the most darkest shade of black.
I am empty,
the thirst needing quenched.

I gracefully dance through the forest,
silently not making a sound.
Fast paces I have set,
no one can be around.

What is this aroma,
dancing around my nostrils?
Sweet as lavender and vanilla.
My singer calls at hunting time.

I smell my singer,
though they are in danger of me.
I need to fill my need,
knowing I cannot hurt them.

Why am I cursed to this nightmare,
living life without the sun?
Living life for all eternity
for a secret only to unfold.

Author notes

I've been reading twilight series and just so happened to glance at the moon.

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 19, 2008

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    excellent~

    Loved this....
    Best of luck in the contest
    I entered too and do hope you come read mine as well
    Susan~~~


  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    October 18, 2008

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    Very nicely done. I did enjoy this very much. But could I ask you to please put the form you are using in the AN I would appreciate it much. Wonderful write thanks for entering


  • Atrophya
    September 11, 2008

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    Twilight is fucking amazing!

    so happy you're reading it =]

    oh and i smell like lavender and vanilla alot of the time. its my favorite scent.

    how'd you know?! =o

    have you been stalking me?!


  • Wolf Mancini
    September 11, 2008

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    Nice poem!

    How are you my dear...I have been pondering your troubles...are you O'K'?
    Are you still Matts girl, or do YOU seek the other?

    Papa wolf