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Unnamed

As the darkness lurks behind her
She puts small foot in front of small foot
Large eyes and wily hair
The youngest of her clan
Her first day of school
Walking through forbidden forests
Laden with poison laced fruit
Her first day
In the big wide world
And all she has to guide her
Is the shadow that lurks behind

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not sure where to credit the artist sorry.

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  • jcat gold member
    September 18, 2008

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    Well you made me fear for my daughters first day of school now.....luckily I have about 3 more years to get over this!!! Therapy is going to be costly after this read!! Thank you for a wonderful entry


    • Meej
      September 18, 2008
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      hopefully it doesnt take that long!! tee hee

      That picture was awesome and really inspired me to write this piece...thanks for the great inspiration :-)

      Hope your daughters first day in 3 years is fun and exciting!