What a tangled web we weave
When first we conceive
The thought of love
For the man who hurts
So ignorantly
To find his truth
For the man who hurts
So blindly
Because he does not think
For the girl who hurts
So ignorantly
As she just plays along
For the girl who hurts
So blindly
As the victim escape her mind
For the lady who hurts
So much
From the games played with her heart
For the lady that hurts
So much
Because fools think of love
What a tangled web we weave
When first we conceive
The though of love
For the man who hurts
For the girl that bruises
For the lady that aches
Such a tangled web
Of lies confusion and pain
Is brought to the surface
Author notes
Dedicated to ..... people..
A contest entry
- w.h.a.t.e.v.e.r you want. impress me? by xxwhatsherfacexx.
450 points, ended September 18, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So?
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"What a tangled web we weave
When first we conceive"
You got me there. The entire piece is beautiful. Stunning. I enjoy reading your work always. You never cease to amaze me... ~~Iridessa~~
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who's it to????
good poem though, i like it...seems like si thosuld have rhymed though...hm...i don't know,...
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Its to people.. i'll tell you in person. kay? anyways, yeah rhyme probably would have been better but i like it the way it is
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but u didn't tell me, you big meanie pants!
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Im sorry remindme tomorrow and i'll tell you
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i love it, its absolutly amazing
every part
in every way.
well... spidey kinda ruins the poem... the web is fine... jsut that... yeah....
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Thank you very much! I appreciate it, i agree i think I'm going to change the background i didn't realize Spidy was in it.
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