Fantastic gyrations of color,
dance around the screen
Hues of gold, bronze and blues,
brightest I’ve ever seen
I wish to follow just on line,
that takes me deep inside
Now lost in a derby of rows,
that stretch so far and wide
Trailing spires that whip then cross,
flinging off the page
Grasping at my sanity,
riding each and every wave
Gone for days inside this maze,
of multi-colored flex
Losing where I’ve entered from,
feeling more perplexed
I found the end way deep within,
this sphere of winding shapes
The six of us will band together,
to try and find escape
What seem to be a gentle mass,
of ever twisting blades
Has turned into the riddle of life,
that now may be our grave
Author notes
http://gi262.photobucket.com/groups/ii84/4P6X685J0/ws_Inspiration_1680x1050.jpg (Bosiarbooger)
A contest entry
- Mesmerize Me by aboomer.
555 points, ended September 21, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice rhyme to this. Thought provoking with good images.
Thank you 'Bosiarbooger' for your entry.
best wishes in the contest
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