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Heated Flavor

You are bursting with such heated flavor
sweet,saucy, spicy and filled with great taste.
Flames rising higher, your scent I savor,
sweats trickling down me as you grip my waist.

Each seed of growth and knowledge explodes fast,
and passion soars rapidly through each pore.
Igniting beneath silk sheets the fires last
flames scorching our lips when we kiss some more.

No pepper, chili or cayenne, tops you,
for you make mouths water and brown eyes burn.
Your qualities fuels the fires between two,
and without hesitation, I take my turn.

Bite into sins atomic bomb and ride,
the waves of heat that will warm the inside.

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a heart is red hot pepper and love is a fire...Unknown This quote is a prompt. Please write a poem inspired by this quote. Around 20 lines. No rules. Thank you so much.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 13, 2008

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    I love the concept and its flvaour of wonderful passion for the love......well done..and thanks for sharing such it..


  • Swan song gold member
    September 12, 2008

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    YOW!Play Wink


  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 12, 2008
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    HOTT

    AS USUAL.


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    September 12, 2008

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    wonderful

    A great take on the prompt dear poetic friend.Very seductive in the way that you wrote this.You give the reader wonderful images as they read your words.
    Best wishes in the contest,Blessings to you,
    ~Angel-anne~


  • cricketjeff gold member
    September 11, 2008
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    metaphorically passionate sonnet.
    Tasty poetry


  • Griswold silver member
    September 10, 2008

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    Well now, should have figured this would come of a prompt like that one. Very cool baby, I love you...Scott


  • Cannonsfire
    September 10, 2008

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    lol Hell yes! C

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