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[ I miss what we had together ]

I miss what we had together
But everything has changed
You're not the same person
And I am not playing games

I can't watch you turn this way
That's something I just won't stand
So i gotta walk away and save myself
Although it wasn't part of our plan

I can never say I hate you
And don't think you could say that about me
But with her by your side
You have totally lost me

I will never forget
All that we have been through
and all the great times we had
When it was me and you

You will always have a place in my heart
Deep down in my core
But i dont know if I can open my heart
and trust you or her anymore

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  • Kimojuno
    October 3, 2008

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    Wow-this piece really speaks wonders and the emotion pores from it. I can feel your heart crumbling as I read.

    Wonderfully written, and thank you wonderfully for sharing,
    Jeffrey (Kimojuno).


  • tortured-heart
    September 11, 2008
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    who did this to you? i'll rip his heart out!
    peace, love, & cheese