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Radio replay
oh how i hate
radio replay
making suggestions of
generic predispositions
judging the world with a fasting
cognition of how human
i really am

Repeating on
repeating on
the same word of mind
and how can i fix
and how can i stop
the drainage crawling from
my wandering eyes
i can't

the world and me
the world is me
and i am the test trial
of how far
one can push the limits
how fuckin lazy
can one person be
before a scolding

will they tell me
what to do
should i read the dozen or so
stories from hypocritical authors
should i stay the same
and wait for some 'awakening'
it's all free will
a love/hate relation

admiration and deception
obsession and regression
words to cover the meanings
words to bring possession
i am tired
help me, doctor
doctor what is
what are

the magic words?

Author notes

i am utterly confused about life, just as every other human should be.
but go ahead, give me a thought.

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  • SchizoChic
    September 11, 2008

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    All you can do is be yourself and once you find out who that is, it's easier. Life is hard tho, make no mistake. We each go through our life trying to do all that we can or we don't. We make our own decisions about who we will ultimately be. Lots of people think they are a product of their environment but I don't always believe that, simply because you still have choices. I wish you the best of luck in this contest and in life as well.