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Death

I sit by and wait
watching the world from above
while I wait
I study my hand, skinny and bone white
I look over the dying
I'm lazily checking over the world
but, ready for sudden action
the moment before a fatal car crash
a flat line
a gun being fired
these things excite me
always awake, waiting
for the time I can come down
from that dark cloud above
and steal

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I was bored in english one day, it's different from what i usually do

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  • XLadyXVengeanceX
    September 10, 2008
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    i like it all of it its dark and awsome