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Creations of an Angel


She appears of a heavenly gift,
a kindred spirit
endowed with angelic vigour
With a halo of hope
that hovers unseen,
radiating in sync to a heart
that oozes loving sympathy
This majestic divinity
cannot be compared

Her charisma converses
with a relishing embrace,
endearing words she utters
of a tender touch
And someone as such
can only be an angel
masked beneath a hidden veil

Reassuring life's zest for love
when a broken-heart become one's bane
Rekindling light to those
fallen in obscurities abyss
and empathetically
bringing faith to effect
as tribute
to the futile and forlorn

Rueful reminiscences
become forgotten whiffs of smoke,
blown away by her delicate charm
for the breath of this angel
bears a welcoming warmth,
re-invigorating vitality
even in the coldest of hearts

Just some amorous acts
of the one so amiable
and only with sincere truth
do i say;
I am greatly honored
to have been blessed
with such an acquaintant

Touched by a hallowed angel,

 

indeed





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  • Alyzeh
    November 11, 2008

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    Wow. What a lucky girl. This is a lovely dedication! All this while I was thinking you had written this on someone else, until I read the last line and then the Author notes. Great write Ken! This piece is excellent. A very very strong write!


  • chilali
    November 5, 2008

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    Simple beautiful!

    I love the background And the poem, well, I bet you arleady know what I am going to say about it. AMAZING! Yes! hahaha. So moving and touching. This again, deserved so much more than an HM.


  • Leonura
    October 16, 2008

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    Look at this heart you have.. Something that can be seen from the words that you write for someone you call friend. They are truly blessed to have you. A beautiful write.


  • Kazytc
    September 17, 2008

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    I am deeply moved by this Ken!

    I am so moved by what you wrote and how you dedicated this one to me, you have moved me deeply and I am so touched. You are an angel in our midst and you pen from your heart and soul and deep within. You write like an angel too, with such feeling and you add emotion to any muse.
    Well done my friend this is another phenomenal write and exquisite in its imagery and rhyme, so vibrant and rich and deep and you do the painting a huge justice and animate it well too.
    Beautifully Presented and Penned! You are a poet of great perfection and talent and I can see you going a long long way in poetry, you are so feeling and have a healing aura about you too. You radiate love and you are so special.
    I only wish it were possible to award everyone a Gold, you as with all deserve this at least.
    Your work is a total joy to read and you never cease to amaze me. Thanks millions and millions for this beautiful poem I am bowled over by it, you are so lovely.
    Please come back and enter my future contests ok!
    Thanks Millions for entering it was an honour to have you in our contest.
    Loads of Poetic Hugs & Thanks millions and millions for my heart and soul for this,
    Kaz.
    Kazytc xxxxx


  • UniversalVoice
    September 17, 2008
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    Beautifully Written

    Beautifully Written with flowing expression, and I could not agree with you more! Great show!


  • Angelflower
    September 17, 2008

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    Aww!!! this is really beautiful!! she is such an angel! everytime I read her comments it makes me smile. You did a wonderful job and I'm sure that she will love it! Best of luck!

    Angel


    • Ken-Maverick
      September 17, 2008
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      Thank you very much Jetleena
      Its nice of you to drop by
      Hope all is well with you


  • alivefromlove
    September 11, 2008
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    this is such a beautiful poem my friend! Great job!!!


  • solitarytear
    September 11, 2008

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    wow

    applausing you here with a million hands.....that was beautifly hon and so kazytc.....she is all that and so much more......if you could enter her b'day one that would be gold.....your writing is something to be seen.....you have a poet soul and heart


  • MelodiousDreaming
    September 10, 2008
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    This is just beautiful! I'm sure she'll love this, it's rather amazing ^_^ as always


  • whos my humblepie
    September 10, 2008

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    this is a glory Mav, so wonderful and I'm jealous it's not for me.

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