Song of thanks to Universe,
all the powers within...
to the great outer cosmos,
every yang and yin...
Connect to the energy,
let your voice be heard,
open up your mind,
you don't have to
say a word...
Forever flowing, energy
comprises all we see,
each flower, animal,
bird,
every river,
ocean, tree.
Connect to the energy,
let your voice be heard,
open up your mind,
you don't have to
say a word...
A contest entry
- Do you understand ... by EvilKate.
1400 points, ended November 7, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I apologise profoundly for the delay in judging. I had some serious health issues to deal with and, for reparation I will be sending each participant some points by way of sincere apology. Thank you for your entry.
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How beautiful the words sing.
Simple plain in truth of God,universe and expanding in the thought.
Marvelous write
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wow, I liked the flow of the poem, and it goes without saying that it was different and interesting.
I never have read a poem quite like this, but I am glad I now have because I really enjoyed it!
Each stanza brings something new to the table, and each are truly fabulous.
Well done,
-NTD
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