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Bleak
The days now look when
Parks
Become crime scenes
Corrupting
The last bit of beauty
People
Have left within city walls

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    September 19, 2008

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    Wow, this is very true. I love the way you wrote this, the way it breaks and then continues on to finish the point. Fantastic write!