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Onion (Etheree)

An
onion
every day
keeps pals away
Strangers away too
seeking a new venue
After all who wants to cry
copious tears when e'er you sigh
So if you desire to share my bed
You'll change your diet, eat garlic instead

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  • penman gold member
    September 14, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • maralisa silver member
    September 11, 2008
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    lol a brilliant take on the promt good luck in the contest