cracked porcelain glitters amongst her acceptance,
darkness prevails for a toxic beauty
torturous prayers try to revive her
a silenced vermillion
enraptured her butterflies,
left them gasping,
condemned to the crystallization
that encompasses their spirit
they danced amongst the graves
awaiting your approval
for their midnight affair
that leaves them vulnerable
to tomorrow
Author notes
7. Word Bank (use at least 5 words)
♥ Porcalin
♥ Cracked
♥ Glitter
♥ Darkness
♥ Prayers
♥ Toxic
♥ Beauty
♥ Torture
♥ Silenced
♥ Vermilion
♥ Butterfly
♥ Condemned
♥ Crystal
♥ Grave
In a list
A contest entry
- xox She Flys Like A Butterfly xox by Butterfly.Wingz.
450 points, ended October 1, 2008, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Pupae again
Waste a word or two next time- or bite off a wing (wink!).


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Very lovely
"Eyes" awaiting your approval. Ya, I recognize this.

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this is really nice.... but can you show me only the words you used
amazingly written tho reminds me of some of my works.
thanks for entering and good luck
xoxoxox
Tahsa -
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every word in my author's notes is used in the poem
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