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Porcelain Cracked

cracked porcelain glitters amongst her acceptance,
darkness prevails for a toxic beauty
torturous prayers try to revive her
a silenced vermillion
enraptured her butterflies,
left them gasping,
condemned to the crystallization
that encompasses their spirit

they danced amongst the graves
awaiting your approval
for their midnight affair
that leaves them vulnerable
to tomorrow




Author notes

7. Word Bank (use at least 5 words)

♥ Porcalin
♥ Cracked
♥ Glitter
♥ Darkness
♥ Prayers
♥ Toxic
♥ Beauty
♥ Torture
♥ Silenced
♥ Vermilion
♥ Butterfly
♥ Condemned
♥ Crystal
♥ Grave

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  • thejollytinker
    September 12, 2008
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    Pupae again

    Waste a word or two next time- or bite off a wing (wink!).


  • csmmoms2
    September 12, 2008
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    Very lovely

    "Eyes" awaiting your approval. Ya, I recognize this.


  • Butterfly.Wingz
    September 11, 2008

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    this is really nice.... but can you show me only the words you used amazingly written tho reminds me of some of my works. thanks for entering and good luck
    xoxoxox
    Tahsa