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Decision

Choice,
make the choice!
Choose,
between those you love.
Dearest one,
I treasure you.
Best friend,
I love you.
Him,
Her,
Choose!
Hurt him,
hurt her,
break him,
break her,
their precious hearts.
It can't go on,
Decide!
Choose!
Ruin your life,
enveloped in sorrow,
in despair,
in regret.
Ruin your life,
one of theirs.
Who?
Who can you even-
who can you bear
to break?

Tell me the truth: Lame or okay?

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  • aidenspektor
    September 10, 2008

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    Je ne comprends pas si la personne dont tu parles est une fille ou un garcon, mais the poem is really good, et je l'aime....pas si beaucoup que la dernier, mais c'est un belle poem and ITS GOOD MWAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA.