You lifted me up to drop me so far.
I am damaged,let me show you my scars.
You made me like this.
My frail heart is scorned.
You treated me like this.
My spirit is torn.
You hated me like this.
The tears still fall from my eyes.
My ears are still full from all of your lies.
What kills me is that I would still die for you.
You did me like this.
I am a part of you.
Author notes
'sell my soul,buy some love' I've used options 3 and 4,and I tried to use all of the categories the best I can.
A contest entry
- Ultimate Challenge; Options Plentiful Otherwise by Kia Tenshi.
1700 points, ended October 15, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like how emotions from this fill up the words and pours over into the reader as you read. I think you could have substituted some more cliché words with more expressive ones, but all in all a wonderful write!
Thanks, and good luck<3 -
i LUvD da LiNe
"My ears are still full from all of your lies."
DiS wAs a ReALy GuD wRiTe!!GuD lUcK iN Da CoNtEsT!!
cHeCk oUt My PoEmS 2!!
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