In the time that I spend with you,
It's the happiest I've ever been.
And whenever we're apart,
I'm counting the seconds off the screen.
Doesnt matter who I'm with,
Or how much fun I'm having.
You not being with me,
Is what I will find most damning.
Because I'm always missing you,
More than I might show.
Because you are as perfect,
As the new fallen snow.
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Michael! I apologize for my tardiness and lack of being around lately but it's so good to see your still writing and espically about a possible young lady? so good man, I love it, simplistic but beautiful at the same time. Keep your writing up and don't be afraid to experiment with your styles either man...Peace n' Love, J
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Cheers for the comment JT nice to see your still around. Hows the Kid coming along, still taking up all your time?!
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AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
One word AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thank you, my girl friend asked me how i felt, couldnt sum it up in any other way than with that poem
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this poem has a nice flow to it...Awesome writting poet....
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