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discontent

desire pales
beneath the frozen
touch
of an icebound
heart

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  • KayJay
    September 13, 2008
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    Darn! I want more This is a wonderful description of the picture but you leave me hanging... From even this brief write, I can see the talent in you and I would so have loved for you to take this a bit beyond. Wonderful words and images... All my best.
    Ken