Running up the stairs to my room
Far away from all the gloom
Of the schoolyard bullies
and all thier systems of pullies
that drag you through the mud
we can be safe as we hit my bed with a thud
It could be like fairytales
With the Princess and the ponytails
But its reality and we can be
Locked away forever and a day
You need to confess to me
How you always seem to be
On my mind
Girl its not right
When your always on my mind
Pinky promise me
That we will someday be
The same way we need to be
tell me what you think
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Hey, this has a lot of potential! Not too terrible, not at all.
To start: line 4, "their", and to rhyme 9 & 10.
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